One of northland one of south and one from far-off shore
Within my ‘salem soul, that most a-harmonious place
The three of them and all of me eternally at war
The southern one has beauty pure the farthest one has grace
But still the northern one has all a truth of soul and face
Three fates, three furies, my wyrd sisters three
Always and forever more they shall never let me be
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I really like this. It made me laugh which probably wasn't your intention but it's good anyway. As far as style I think it has a lot of strong points. The best line is "The three of them and all of me eternally at war". And I love that you said it was just junk that you salvaged from your computer and just polished a bit.
I agree with Nadia's coments regarding the strengths. That is the purpose of independent writing sometimes.
I thought "Always and forever more" was a bit cliche, but I like the allusions. Not many young writers use them often or skillfully. Good work.
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