THORtheBUNNY

THORtheBUNNY
before that fateful operation

Tuesday, May 22, 2007

independent piece 8

Queen of Flies


There she is the queen of flies
Embodiment of God
Infinitely powerful
Yet still endlessly ignored

Embodiment of God
She sits alone with all her flies
Yet still endlessly ignored
While near her no one treads

She sits alone with all her flies
Amid the bustle of a crowd
While near her no one treads
No one knows the her she is

Amid the bustle of a crowd
She manages to isolate herself
No one knows the her she is
For she is more than any know

She manages to isolate herself
Despite the swarming mass of man
For she is more than any know
And no one dares to learn

Despite the swarming mass of man
She sets herself apart from all
And no one dares to learn
About the girl with all the flies

She sets herself apart from all
Except her tiny buzzing brood
About the girl with all the flies
Buzz a multitude of subjects

2 comments:

Mr. Popken said...

Interesting structure. AI liked the "No one knows the her she is."

The "buzzing brood" is particularly appropriate.

Jay Kauzer said...

AHA! It's Caitlin isn't it! I bet it is ! It has to be!...or I could be completely wrong that is. I mean I'm really bad at literary analysis...or analysuis of any kind for that matter. In fact I'm not even sure how to spell analysis. I think that's right. Oh well no matter. Excellent application of Allegory. Well done. toodles.