Tuesday, May 22, 2007
independent piece 8 intro
Another God piece. This one is a Pantoum (that's a type of repeated line pattern) inspired by, what else, a girl and some flies. When I started it, it didn't have anything to do with religion, it was just a poem about a girl. Than it took this whole turn and it was all tied together so I couldn't change anything and it went downhill from there. Anyways, read it and comment on it, but don't enjoy it. If you want to read a good poem on this topic scroll down to independent piece 7 a little ways down the page. Knick-knack patty-whack give a dog a bone.
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Wait. I'm sorry but by it not being about religion at first did you literally mean the first line? B/c "God" pops up in the second.
That line way actually changed to that in a later revision after the poem was finished.
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