independent piece 2 intro

So, as I’m abundantly certain Nadia will point out, this is an older piece. I wrote a while ago but it has undergone recent re-editing so I’m saying it counts as new. Take that. Anyways, I like this piece for several reasons; first off, I wrote it and I’m awesome, but more importantly, I think it’s a good poem. Not a great poem by any means, but it has all the things a decent poem needs. It has a message, albeit a clumsy and forced one, and it uses esoteric vocabulary, which I think is always fantastic. So you folks can say anything you want ‘cause I love this piece with my whole heart and refuse to make changes of any kind to it. In fact, if you suggest improvements it will only make me discredit you in the future. Enjoy.